yay!

I’ve finally finished the editing, it took a lot of work and there where a few troubles.

It needs to be an enclosure in the RSS feed so I can subscribe to it as a podcast and aren’t tethered to a tiny player in a browser window.

did you mean this? http://gmvision.tv/gmvision/home/?feed=rss2
you can click the link at the bottom right hand corner to watch the video on a bigger player. I did not want to embed a larger one here because it sometimes messes up the frames.

This is awesome i cant wait for a new episode.

And you sister and you are awesome! =D

Thanks for the first 100% positive comment
We will be back, and with greater effort then before. I will have her sit more still next time though.

The graphics were really well done. But the green screen needed a little work, not bad though.

One thing I wanted to comment on right away is, you need to rehearse your scripts!!! You guys either didn’t rehearse enough, or you just don’t work well in front of a camera. I don’t mean any offense, you guys just didn’t talk naturally and kept stumbling over your lines. It made me not want to watch it anymore. It isn’t fun to watch when you guys look like you’d rather not be talking in front of the camera. So next episode, you guys need to work on that more. You need to act as if you are holding a conversation with the person watching, a conversation about something that you are really interested in and want to share.

Also, during the interview, make sure to edit out the parts where you are reaching to start the camera… ;P

Good luck with your future episodes.

Thanks for the compliments and the constructive criticism. We will certainly work on it

Who’s that annoying woman? She’s no good. She don’t know what she’s talking about and stresses too much on all the wrong words. The people all look the same, with that scary curly black hair. You can tell that all the people are reading a script (It sounds like me trying to read something I’ve never read before).

I thought it was pretty good. The effects and such were nice. Well done editing. I have to agree though (partially) with bob. The lines weren’t down super good, and the girl as a little shaky. She didn’t seem to know as if she didn’t know what she was talking about though, bob.

Overall: – 7.5/10

PS: A greater variety of actors would be super too. But that’s just minor.

Ok, a few things kind of annoyed me through out the whole video.
One of the first flaws I saw was with the girl. She was moving around too much and should slow down more often. THe second flaw is that you guys should do a rundown and try to practice your lines more. Some times you guys were a little ‘erk erk’ but other than that it was pretty good,.

@playjamesgames:
Thanks, I will defiantly work on that with her

@Flipbee9:
A rundown of our lines, or a rundown of games or somthing?

Hello. I think the article is really interesting. I am even interested in reading more. How soon will you update your blog?

Well Gary,
We only update it when there is some thing to put out on it, but we always check it for new comments (like I am now) and then reply to then. Don’t worry though, we will have more updates soon.

When are you going to release a new episode? =D

Well, I am actually working on the next episode now.

No, I meant that the episodes need to be enclosures in the RSS feed so that podcast clients can find them.